Hey Kayla, Off the top, I wanted to say that your articulation was very clean and nice. I also really liked your “imagine..” statements because it really forces the listener to put themselves in a situation where they are conscious of the need for better straws. I like how your pitch emphasized that your solution was more of a compromise between plastic straws and paper straws.
Hello Kayla! I really liked your post and video and the way you clearly elaborated on your product and the potential to fulfill the opportunity. The way you included the viewer and reader into your concept was wonderful as it really puts them in your shoes and they have the chance to see firsthand how the product could impact their lives. Very well done.
Hello Kayla, I really liked your elevator pitch. It was really great how you elaborated on your product and made it easy for the audience to follow along. I also like the solution you came up for the problem, I feel like that way people that align with either side can be happy.
Hi Kayla! I like how you got to the point, very clear spoken. The recent implementation of paper straws over plastic, and you coming up with an eco-friendly straws as a consensus between the two sides is a great idea to have. You were very engaging into the topic, and got the viewers to follow along thoroughly, given us to be put in those situations, nicely done.
Hey Kayla,
ReplyDeleteOff the top, I wanted to say that your articulation was very clean and nice. I also really liked your “imagine..” statements because it really forces the listener to put themselves in a situation where they are conscious of the need for better straws. I like how your pitch emphasized that your solution was more of a compromise between plastic straws and paper straws.
Hello Kayla! I really liked your post and video and the way you clearly elaborated on your product and the potential to fulfill the opportunity. The way you included the viewer and reader into your concept was wonderful as it really puts them in your shoes and they have the chance to see firsthand how the product could impact their lives. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteHello Kayla, I really liked your elevator pitch. It was really great how you elaborated on your product and made it easy for the audience to follow along. I also like the solution you came up for the problem, I feel like that way people that align with either side can be happy.
ReplyDeleteHi Kayla!
ReplyDeleteI like how you got to the point, very clear spoken. The recent implementation of paper straws over plastic, and you coming up with an eco-friendly straws as a consensus between the two sides is a great idea to have. You were very engaging into the topic, and got the viewers to follow along thoroughly, given us to be put in those situations, nicely done.